Do you see any patterns?

From this paragraph, I seem to use rhetorical questions frequently throughout my paper. In this paper i used it in my introduction and my third body paragraph. Also in my third body, I used the word “synesthesia” frequently but that was because it was the topic of my paragraph.

Do you rely on certain devices more than other?

I tend to vary the devices I use frequently. I always vary my sentence structure, mixing in relative clauses, complex and compound sentences, and so on.

Are there any passages that are hard to follow–and if so, can you make them easier to read by trying any of the other devices discussed in this chapter?

I don’t believe so. My sentences and paragraphs generally have good flow to them. If anything, better and more improved transitions between paragraphs. But besides that, I think I have good flow in my essay.